The Climb
May 30, 2013 in Poetry, Teen Troubles
Climbing up a mountain, Pulling yourself higher and higher. Out of the pit of misery. Things seem to look brighter. Grass is growing, Birds are singing, And the sun emerges from the clouds. Then you start to slip, To lose your grasp, And down you fall. Not quite to the bottom, Just teetering on a ledge, Could you go over at any moment
Have you the strength to climb again? The pain of your cut soul Burns like a fire, The anger, hurt and frustration Come flooding back into your mind. The fight for survival starts again. Overcome the fear, Search for the holds, Rely on the support from before. I know it’s going to be difficult, But you did it once, You can do it again. Remember, you’re not the only one – Out there are other climbers Fighting their own battles, Searching their own soul And conquering their own mountains.
Brooke said on July 13, 2014
It’s a wonderful poem , And it relates to Most teens
Brooke said on July 13, 2014
It’s a wonderful poem
Jess Barber said on July 18, 2014
I love this sooooooooo much
E said on July 24, 2014
Beautiful
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Emma Kathryn said on September 6, 2014
Wow, I love this! It’s completely relatable and understandable.
Christine said on October 8, 2014
<3 pure love. Just what I needed.
Rachel Wozzie said on October 19, 2014
absolutely beautiful
Carla said on November 4, 2014
I can relate to this very well, so I enjoyed reading this.
Just A Girl said on February 23, 2015
Perfection <3
Dalya Gald said on February 25, 2015
I found it powerful. INSPIRING if you will.
Abigail said on April 17, 2015
thank you for making this it has helped me so much .:)
Zameel said on April 22, 2015
this one is awesome….:D
love it.
i like the style of writing….:)
Sab said on May 1, 2015
Very inspiring!!!!!!!
hayaat said on May 6, 2015
I guess only a teen can understand the true meaning of this poem!
Blakelee Sage Knight said on June 25, 2015
Absolutely relatable.
Nadia said on July 11, 2015
i love this <3
Rachel said on August 2, 2015
This is really amazing. I wish I could write as good as you. Totally relatable.
Amy said on August 12, 2015
We all have mountains…it doesn’t matter how tall the mountain is, it matters how many times you can conquer it. This is beautiful
Samantha said on August 24, 2015
This is so touching. It pulls on my heart strings
Lia Starlight said on November 6, 2015
I think you’re an amazing writer!!
Laniqua Turner said on September 1, 2016
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