The Climb

May 30, 2013 in Poetry, Teen Troubles

 

 

Climbing up a mountain, Pulling yourself higher and higher.  Out of the pit of misery. Things seem to look brighter. Grass is growing, Birds are singing, And the sun emerges from the clouds. Then you start to slip, To lose your grasp, And down you fall. Not quite to the bottom, Just teetering on a ledge, Could you go over at any moment

Have you the strength to climb again? The pain of your cut soul Burns like a fire, The anger, hurt and frustration Come flooding back into your mind. The fight for survival starts again. Overcome the fear, Search for the holds, Rely on the support from before. I know it’s going to be difficult, But you did it once, You can do it again. Remember, you’re not the only one – Out there are other climbers Fighting their own battles, Searching their own soul And conquering their own mountains.

50 responses to The Climb

  1. i like this… i think a lot of teen-agers can relate to this… 🙂

  2. This is a very nice poem, maybe one day you will have a career as a poet.

  3. I agree to every teen including me being able to relate to it. Every one has to take the climb in order to make it to the top.

  4. I really like your blog and im glad you have made it.being a teen myself ii think there should be more out there, and also because im a teen would you perhaps come tomy blog and give your opinion? thank you and keep up your great work 🙂

  5. This is really good .

  6. This is not my site, Diary for teens is run by the amazing Kat, who has given me a place to write and share my work with the world, and young teens.

  7. Very amazing poet. Its so true, life is such a climb. We fall again and again, but always find a way to get back up again.

  8. wow. I want to be a climber.

  9. I like this it’s really good. It reminded me of my ex boyfriend who stomped on my heart. I’m going to be a climber <3

  10. I really like this. Its really good!!!

  11. This is just amazing!!!!

  12. This is really good! I am climbing.

  13. Very good,you can this:)

  14. 😀

  15. This is awesome! 🙂 And so much like life.

  16. I love this one, it is so inspirational and fills my eyes with tears.. Absolutely amazing.

  17. Beautiful.. Could You read My Post And Comment ON What i Should Do ?

  18. really is beautiful

  19. This is truly beautiful.

  20. this is soo good! a lot of people, including me, could relate to this! you really do have a way with words!

  21. this is a beautiful poem. i really loved it

  22. Wow, that’s amazing.

  23. Hey! Love your stuff:).The Climb was very easy to relate to. Do check out my blog at scribblingdabbling.blogspot.in as well. Its brand new, designed for women, and is up and about with the festive spirit! See you around.. Keep blogging:)

  24. i love this…

  25. Heeeey just created this account! sad thing id that im suppose to be working on school work but instead im on here lol!

  26. Its an Amazing Poem. I wish mine were that good

  27. This is amazing… this poem speaks to me. As I was reading it, I was also connecting, and I think that’s what makes any piece of writing special.

  28. This explains my life. I love this!

  29. it is jus beautiful…. i like the way it was presented..ya i resembles to every teens life..one has to make the climb in order to reach the top position….

  30. Great read, its the little things in life that can inspire you 🙂

  31. really good 🙂

  32. This poem is truly amazing!!

  33. This really is beautiful. I have a friend who writes such beautiful poetry- and dreams do come true. Never loose hope. 🙂

    Love,
    Jess

  34. i can completly relate to this. but you have to find the strength to go on and try again.

  35. this is a beautiful poem of the life

  36. this is a beautiful poem of the life ^.^

  37. this is inspiring:)

  38. Its so true, life is such a climb. We fall again and again, but always find a way to get back up again everything has a time

  39. So tired of climbing just to fall again though…

  40. this post made me become a member. this is exactly how i feel and i have searched sites to site to find something…anything that can express how i feel…i was even going to start to think that i was the only one going through this “phase” but i am glad that i am not alone. i hope to start writing and ti start expressing myself without someone pointing a figure at you or sticking their nose all up in your business. once again thank you for the amazing post…all your post are great!

  41. This is the first post I saw when I first came on this site. Its what I saw that made me want to become a member. This is truly beautiful. I love your other post “Barbie Doll” too(:

  42. LOVE IT!!!!

  43. This is beautiful, a lot of people will be able to relate to it

  44. I can really relate to this because I face a new climb everyday and with each climb they have their own problems to overcome. I really like this

  45. This is amazing and so inspiring

  46. Honestly I think this is what the name of the time we are teens should be named. It perfectly says what we go through without the descriptions or details. So, to the person who created that should be awarded with a teen life accomplishment award or whatever….whoever they are they are very smart!!!!

  47. Wow that was really powerful

  48. Wow that is really good!!

  49. Jess said on July 1, 2014

    climbing..

  50. Your blog is amazing! I LOVE your design and how informative it is! Everything is GREAT!

    would you like to follow each other?

    Will be happy to see you in my blog! Beautiiboots.blogspot.com

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